Saturday, May 3, 2008

Noise - Haiku

Thwack, smash, stomp, king kong,
Crashing, kicking, screaming, bong,
I am noisy too!


Meghan said...

well doesn't fit the 5 7 5 pattern and im sorry but it's not that good

Meghan said...

I didnt like that much because of the 5 7 5 pattern a haiku should have.sorry

Jazmin R said...

i think it was pretty cool but everyone has there own opinion.